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I couldn’t help but started taking a lot of pictures because the regalia that the dancers had on were vigorously stunning. It was so much different than what I saw in pictures and videos. I was especially amazed by the male regalia. It was delicately put together with feathers and different pieces; and the details and the patterns of the clothes were like a piece of art. However, some people just had a cape and sunglasses on. It showed that dress code for pow wow is not too strict and people can wear whatever they like to the event. I politely asked one of the dancers to take a photo with me and she was very nice to me. After taking the picture, we talked for a few minutes. She then excused herself because she was about to go out to the field and dance.
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I couldn’t help but start taking a lot of pictures because the regalia that the dancers had on were vigorously stunning. It was so much more different than what I saw in pictures and videos. I was especially amazed by the male regalia. It was delicately put together with feathers and different pieces; and the details and the patterns of the clothes were like a piece of art. However, some people just had a cape and sunglasses on. It showed that dress code for pow wow is not too strict and people can wear whatever they like to the event. I politely asked one of the dancers to take a photo with me and she was very nice to me. After taking the picture, we talked for a few minutes. She then excused herself because she was about to go out to the field and dance.